Redpatch- Wip

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NAME! Redpatch
AGE! 12 moons.
RANK! Warrior
GENDER! male
CLAN! Shadowclan
SHORT DESC.! A medium gray tabby with lighter oranges tabby patches and bright amber eyes.
FULL DESCRIPTION!

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PERSONALITY!

He is very soft spoken, and will try and listen rather then talk unless its his siblings he is talking to. Speaking up is hard for him, as he is very nervous of saying something wrong around the other warriors. For example if he is trying to talk in a crowd or even a senior warrior he shivers from the pressure of it. His heart is sweet and kind, and he tries his best to put the clan first, and listen to the warrior code. He feels very non-confrontational about most things, but has grown to realize that if something must be said that he should say it. Not that she will of course, as he doesn't like hurting others feelings.
He is deathly shy of speaking out to others, and his voice is quiet and hard to hear when he is unsure of his answer, even if its right. Particularly he is afraid of talking to toms, and  stutters no matter there age, he just gets nervous. The older ones are more fright educing. He can't win, though hopes to find a caring female, maybe even a daredevil to help keep him strong and loved and to start a family with.

HISTORY!

Ambershine - mother - mate - Hawktail - kits - REDKIT, SOOTKIT, DUSK-KIT
Hawktail - father - other mate - Dawnfur - Rc - kits- Pantherstride
Pantherstride - Step Brother - alive

Ambershine and Hawktail were mates after Hawktail realized where his loyalties lay. Hawktail first fell in love with Dawnfur a female from Riverclan. They had a son named Pantherstrike. Redkit was born two years after his father dedicated himself fully to Shadowclan after Dawnfur left him and took another tom as mate. Ambershine had always loved hawktail, so she became his mate. Redkit and his siblings sootkit and Duskkit were born into a world that was intolerant of there father, but loved there mother. She was loyal to Riverclan, but Hawktail skirted around his duties and was void of purpose after his first mate cheated on him, even after the birth of his kits.

Redpaw was the middle kit, and always wanted to play games and get into trouble.  At heart he was a sweety, but he acted out to spite his father and the lack of attention they got as kits. His mentor was Fernwhisker, a gentle and patient she cat that taught him nobility and respect. Redpaw became well liked, though he still clung to the bonds with his brothers more then anything. His strength is in teaching others and in fighting, because he is light on his paws, and quick to react. He hopes one day to prove himself, and is a new warrior having gotten the name Redpatch from his patchy tabby fur.


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RP EXAMPLE!

The light filtered in from the reeds and woke up the tightly curled form of Redpatch. His eyes weakly opened to greet the light, as tirdness crept into his eyes from lack of sleep. The night before he had recieved his name, and had stood watch over the camp in silent vigil.  It would take some time for him to adjust to the new den, sure he was glad he would no longer get flattened by the apprentices, but he felt out of place here. His brothers were snoozing nearby he was certain.

Relenting and giving up the idea of achieving sleep altogether, he stretched arching his back in a great show of his limberness, and sighed as he made to leave the den. Squinting he  made his entrance into the life as a warrior.

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