Post by ottie on May 26, 2013 15:31:40 GMT -5
NAME! Firestorm.
AGE! 64 moons.
RANK! Warrior.
GENDER! Male.
CLAN! Thunderclan.
SHORT DESC.! Large, long-haired, bright orange tom with green eyes.
FULL DESCRIPTION!
PERSONALITY!
HISTORY!
RP EXAMPLE!
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AGE! 64 moons.
RANK! Warrior.
GENDER! Male.
CLAN! Thunderclan.
SHORT DESC.! Large, long-haired, bright orange tom with green eyes.
FULL DESCRIPTION!
Firestorm is a very large tom. His long fur only makes him look larger and underneath all of his fur is muscle. He isn't a weak cat, which is obvious. He's got a lot of strength behind his size. Some of his scars from battles are visible and others are not. The color of his fur is something no one misses. Once they see the fiery orange they immediately know who it is. It is very bright and noticeable. There are some tabby stripes mixed in, around his face and legs, but most don't see them at a glance. The fur around his muzzle gets a little darker. His whiskers are long and white. And his nose and pads seem to blend in with his fur, but are actually pink. There are black speckles on and around his nose. Firestorm has beautiful green eyes that aren't extremely bright, but they aren't dull either.
PICTURE!
PERSONALITY!
Firestorm is that typical, loyal Thunderclan warrior. He lives to serve and protect his clan. It's his duty to adhere to and enforce the warrior code. He will obey his leader and is considered extremely trustworthy. In times of peril he will be sure to help out and make sure things get done efficiently. He is not intimidated by having responsibilities in the clan and will easily give direction. Firestorm is a fierce fighter who will protect any of his clan members at the cost of his own life. He has saved many of his clan and has the scars to prove it.
As noble a fighter as Firestorm is, he has a soft heart. He's never cruel, harsh, or mean to his clanmates. If they deserve to be punished, then he won't argue. But he is normally a very kind tom. Firestorm has many friends in and out of Thunderclan. Cats in other clans have even mentioned wishes of the warrior being a part of their clan instead of Thunderclan. All of the unwanted attention never fills Firestorm's head with delusions of grandeur. He doesn't let any of the talk or compliments get to his head and he is definitely not self-centered. He knows his place in the world and isn't seeking power or fame.
HISTORY!
Firekit was born early one morning in leafbare. He had one sibling, a sister named Yellowkit. His mother, Amberclaw, was considered a fierce warrior. His father, Grasstail, was a more laid back warrior who enjoyed peace over fighting. The two had their differences, but they loved each other and their new family all the same.
Amberclaw wasn't the most affectionate mother, never coddling her kits and teaching them to be strong cats. Grasstail was more of loving parent, comforting them when Amberclaw wouldn't. The two siblings were close, enduring their mother's hardships together. Some days it was as if she blamed her kits for keeping her cooped up in the nursery when all she wanted was to go out and be a warrior again.
The two kits became apprentices and their mother stayed away from them for the most part. The only times she would speak to them is if they were misbehaving or embarrassing her. She would check in with Firepaw's mentor to make sure he was becoming a good warrior, which he was. Firepaw loved to train with his mentor, Tumblefoot. Yellowpaw would often join the two toms in training. Her mentor was constantly sick.
Firepaw didn't mind one bit though, he actually preferred training with his sister. They would help each other hunt and spar for practice. Eventually Yellowpaw was assigned a new mentor once Amberclaw complained that her children were having too much fun with their training. She didn't believe them to be learning as much as they could.
Yellowpaw's new mentor was strict, refusing to let Tumblefoot and Firepaw train with them. Firepaw noticed a change in Yellowpaw's demeanor and didn't like it. He tried talking to his father and even the leader about it. Unfortunately nothing was done about it. Firepaw and Yellowpaw still wanted to be close, but Yellowpaw's mentor and Amberclaw kept them separate as much as possible.
When it was finally time for Firepaw and Yellowpaw to become warriors, they were beyond excited. Before they could though, Amberclaw insisted that they have another test to prove they were both ready. While out hunting on this test, Yellowpaw came across a loner. He was very hostile and tried attacking the apprentice. Firepaw heard his sister's scream as she fought back. He ran to help her and noticed his mother crouching in the bushes nearby. Once Firepaw fought the loner off of his sister and away from the border of Thunderclan, he turned to check on Yellowpaw.
She was no where in sight. There was another scream from his sister, but this time it was more like a battle cry. Firepaw took off towards the noise and found his sister standing over their mother, blood covered the surrounding area and Amberclaw's face. Firepaw stood in shock as he realized his little sister had blinded their mother. A few warriors who were out on patrol also heard the commotion and came across the same gruesome scene as Firepaw had.
They didn't have an explanation though. A couple warriors helped Amberclaw. Others forced Yellowpaw back to camp, despite Firepaw's pleas to give him a chance to explain. While Amberclaw was being treated, the warriors who found the two apprentices and their mother explained what they saw out in the forest to the leader. Firepaw had his chance to explain and so did Yellowpaw. The scared she-cat claimed she called out to her mother for help when the loner attacked, but Amberclaw refused to help her. She was going to let her own daughter die.
The leader let Amberclaw give her side of the story. When all of the evidence was collected the leader was left with a difficult decision. He had to exile Yellowpaw. Firepaw begged for the leader to let her stay, but the leader's paws were tied. There was no justification in blinding a clanmate. Yellowpaw had to leave camp and was told never to come back or else. She was not to be found on Thunderclan territory ever again.
Firepaw grieved for the loss of his sister, but felt not sympathy or compassion for his mother as she was forced to become an elder. Grasstail attempted to comfort his son as much as possible. The leader decided to try and cheer the apprentice up he would finally receive his warrior name. Firepaw became Firestorm, but it didn't feel right. He knew his sister should be standing next to him, receiving her warrior name.
A few moons after Amberclaw became an elder, her health began to deteriorate. One evening Firestorm went to visit his mother for the first time since the incident. He took her berries to eat, but little did she know they were deathberries. This was the one and only time that Firestorm has gone against the warrior code. He finished what his sister couldn't. Amberclaw died a few minutes later and Firestorm left her body in the elder's den for someone else to find. No one ever realized she was murdered and Firestorm has not and will not tell anyone his dark secret.
He has protected his clan with his own life multiple occasions and has tried to forget about his mother. Thunderclan knows that Firestorm is a brave fighter, but loving friend. They don't suspect he would ever do anything against the warrior code. Every so often he thinks about his sister, who is still out there somewhere and his father, who passed away just a few moons ago from greencough. He has yet to find a mate, but is in no rush to do so.
RP EXAMPLE!
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